Thursday, June 7, 2007

Introduction to "To Chip or Not to Chip"

This is my third MWA which was a persuasive essay. It covers the controversial topic of implanting computer chips in humans for security. This essay shows how my ability to write effective sentences has improved. I have never written an essay to persuade before. This is the second time I have ever used citations in a paper and we learned to incorporate them into out sentences. An example of this is when I stated, “Most RFID’s send out a signal and ‘…the data on the tags can be read by equipment from a few inches to several feet away -- and sometimes a bit farther.’(Sieberg)”

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